RightWriter offers professional copywriting services designed to boost your direct marketing response rates.
Here’s Your Chance To Do Less Work
and Take More Credit
We see lots of clever ads these days. Some are funny, some are high tech. But to tell you the truth, sometimes I don’t even know what the ad is selling. Now, to me, that’s a waste of money,
In order for your advertising to work, it needs to convince the prospective customer to become a buyer. To convince customers that they need your product or service you need to show them how they will benefit from it.
Your ads need to be honest and straightforward. Your ad should explain clearly and concisely what you are offering and why the customer should chose to purchase from you, rather than your competition. I can help you with that.
I’m On Your Side!
Let me introduce myself. My name is Carmen Hobbs. I am a freelance direct mail copywriter. I can put my life experiences to work for you by reaching your prospects’ core emotions and providing them with good solid reasons why they want, need or deserve your product or service.
As a copywriter, I want to write to promote products and programs that will help people. Whether they want to become healthier, wealthier or just happier. Maybe your product or service can make their lives easier or help them succeed. You may have information or products that will help you prospects find ways in which they can help others.
But until we tell them about what your have to offer them, they will either do without or find what they need from your competition. That’s why I want to write for you! I want to be your advocate.
ADVOCATE– (v) 1) to speak in favor of; 2) recommend; 3) to support, - (n) 1) a person who argues for the cause; supporter or defender. 2) a person who pleads in another’s behalf; 3) a lawyer.
A copywriter, like a lawyer, is an advocate for the client (or his employer). Just as the lawyer uses all the arguments at his disposal to win the case, so does the copywriter use all the facts at his disposal to win the consumer over to the product.
Robert W. Bly, World’s Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Direct response advertising is worth nearly $2 trillion dollars in sales annually! Companies would not keep sending promotions through the mail unless they were enormously successful. I know you want your company to have its rightful share of the market and I want to help!
You Could Hire A Copywriter With Years of Experience …
If you want only the “Master” copywriters writing for you, you may have to wait months or even years to get a slot in their schedule. Then, your only problem would be finding a way to come up with the unbelievably expensive fees they charge.
You Could Try To Do It All Yourself…
You have a lot of responsibilities. You know everything there is to know about the products or services you have to offer. You know who your prospects are. But here’s one thing I bet you don’t have — and that’s a lot of extra time on your hands. I know that there is a mountain of copy that needs to be written to successfully sell the products and services you offer through the mail.
Or You Can Hire Someone Like Me Who Has Knowledge Of “Secrets” That 90% Of The Copywriters Working Today Have Never Learned!
(Source: Accelerated Copywriting Course, page 294)
I want to work for you writing fresh new direct-response advertising copy with the goal of increasing your responses and sales. And my fees are reasonably set so that you will get the best return for your marketing investment. If you are interested in a fresh voice for your copy, call me today at (406) 209-2746 or e-mail me at carmenhobbs@bresnan.net and I’ll get started right away!
Here’s how:
· I’ll review your current marketing materials to see what’s been working, or not working, and why
· I’ll do a comprehensive study of your products and services to determine which features give your prospects the benefits they most desire
· I’ll research your competition’s products and services to compare them and show why the prospect should choose you over the competition, or to help you improve so you can compete at their level
· I’ll get to know your customers and prospective customers to understand what motivates them to buy your product or service, and what will keep them coming back for more
Whether you have an immediate need, or a future project, consider giving me the opportunity to write copy for you. Because if you do, when I’m successful in helping increase your response rate, we'll BOTH succeed!
My Personal No Risk Guarantee
I will work tirelessly towards YOUR SUCCESS! That’s right! I will advocate on behalf of your business with the goal of increasing your customer base and your bottom line. All you have to do is call (406) 388-2078 or 209-2746 or e-mail me at carmenhobbs@bresnan.net today!
Some people say that there are very few guarantees in life. Some people even think there are no guarantees. But that’s not entirely true. In fact, I’ll make you a guarantee right now. If you are not confident that my sales copy will increase your direct mail sales – just return it to me with your comments within 30 days and I’ll re-write it for you, at no extra cost to you! There is no risk to you! You can’t lose!
P.S. This GUARANTEED NO RISK offer will not last forever. I’m making this offer only to a few carefully chosen companies whose products I would be proud to write for. If you pass on this offer, you may never know what opportunities you are passing up. Just call (406) 388-2078 or 209-2746 or e-mail me at carmenhobbs@bresnan.net today.
